Storyweb - Hildie Bitterpickles Needs Her Sleep.
By Robin Newman illustrated by Chris Ewald.
Title=Hildie Bitterpickles Needs Her Sleep
Setting= Hildie's bedroom .
Characters= Hildie,a giant,an old lady,8 children,a wolf,3 blind mice,a pig,one rat called Monty,20 black sheep, and a cat called Clawdia.
Beginning=Hildie lives in a small quiet cottage with her cat Clawdia. then her new neighbours move in and let's just say they definitely did not stay quiet…
Middle=Hildie gets sick of her new neighbours and she decides to move out but is it the best choice...
End=Hildie did not like her loud neighbours so when she moved back into her old house she went to tell her neighbours how loud they were and she made them say sorry. That night when she to sleep and guess what she heard ? nothing…
The end
By Francesca 01/03/17
Hi there, my name is Krisha and I am a student in room 21 at Owairaka School. I really like your story web it’s so cool . It made me think of a moonless night . Have you thought about making have you thought of making a animation slide about it . If you would like to see my learning, please visit my blog krishas.blogspot.co.nz
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DeleteHi there, my name is Hadia and I am a student in room 21 at Owairaka School. I really like Hildie Bitterpickles Needs Her Sleep Story web. It made me think of the Story web I made about sleeping beauty but it was so long. Have you thought about adding Evaluation means what good does does it do to you. If you would like to see my learning, please visit
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Thank you soooooo much Hadia looooooooove your blog :) :P
Deletehi frankie its adam thats a good story that you write you shud macke more i spelt it rong
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